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                                             October 1-8, 2007


Anne Radcliff's "Mysteries of Udolpho" (1794)

  The first really remarkable
  feature of this book: it's *so*
  slow! Slow by our standards, to
  be sure, and to be expected, but
  it's so slow it's hard to imagine
  anyone being engaged by it.

       You get hundreds of pages into
       it's 700 odd, and you will find
       NOTHING HAS HAPPENED.  The             It's astounding, Lovecraft
       main characters don't even             praised Radcliff for ability
       arrive at the castle Udolpho           to establish atmosphere,
       of the title until page 200            and objected only to the
       or so.                                 poetry.

                                                  But then:
    Shifting fashions in
    the style of prose.                              GHOSTWATCH

    Once it was very verbose
    and slow, then during the
    pulp period it became                         Ah, and also...
    terse and quick...
                                                      SPOILERS
    Now it's veered
    somewhat back                                     I think he also
    toward the        PARSIMONY                       objected to her
    earlier style.                                    constant resolution
                                                      of the fantastic
                                                      elements as an
           As the novel progresses,                   illusion rooted
           the prose takes on a kind                  in the mundane.
           of weight, there's a
           definite fascination here                     Everything
           after around the half-way                     neatly explained.
           mark, watching the
           gathering storm clouds
           around this remarkably
           passive woman, as she
           bounces between clear
           knowledge and obvious
           denial --

                But midway through, I was
                left wondering: Where *can*
                this story go?  Our heroine
                has only two possible             Ah: around two-thirds of
                saviours, two forms of            the way through, she
                calvary that can storm in         comes up with a glimmer
                and save the day without          of an escape plan!  It's
Lacking         her getting her dainty,           absurdly late, and
strength        feminine hands dirty: the         ineffectual, but it gives
of arms,        arrival of Vallancourt            one the sense that she
or a line       and/or supernatural               might not be thoroughly
of communi-     intervention -- the revenge       retarded.
cation with     of ghosts on the badguys
any author-                                         (She asks her maid
ity; she             (Vallancourt                   if her boyfriend
deigns to            being the guy                  might be able to
indulge in           she *should*                   spring the two of
any distaste-        have just                      them on promise of
ful activity         eloped with and                reward later.)
such as              avoided the
spying or            entire fucking
conspiracy...        problem, but
                     *noooo* she had
                     to keep a
                     promise made to       I had a thought that
                     her evidently         the stuff she read in
                     braindead dear        her father's papers
                     deceased              before burning them
                     father).              might be a terrible
                                           spell, some words of
                                           power to invoke the
                                           spirts on her behalf.
                                           Were this a, shall we
                                           say, *normal* story,
                       By the by...        where the hero is       With "women's
                       I don't think       expected to have some   fiction" such
                       we're ever          role in their fate,     as this, all
                       told what the       I might have been       bets are off.
                       hell she read       correct.
                       that was such
                       a shock.            SPOILERS

                       Radcliffe went         But I'd forgotten
                       through the            Radcliffe's
                       trouble to set         reputation as a
                       up that wild           tease that always
                       card, and later        explains away the
                       to remind the          supernatural by
                       reader that it         the end.
                       exists, and then
                       never plays it.        Funny, because
                                              that's one of the
                                              reasons I resolved     (Way back
   By the end of the story,                   to read this book:     when, 700
   it surprises by developing                                        long pages
   a degree of psychological                  I was interested       ago.)
   realism underneath the                     in the history of
   stilted prose.                             that trope.

   And all in all,                            No one would be
   this is a huge       The major             interested in this
   improvement on       plot twists           form who was not
   Walpole's            that turn             fascinated by the
   "Castle of           up are                fantastic, and yet
   Otranto".            pretty                it's important to
                        crazy though:         undercut it and
     (Which strikes                           return to the normal
     me as a more       Everything            by story's end.
     direct             is tied up                                  That is,
     influence on       with               Is this intended         if you
     Sir Walter         Udolpho            to sanitize it in        regard
     Scott than                            some way?                pirates
     Radcliffe.)                                                    creeping
                                           Tales of the             through
       Could it be that                    daemonic that pose       secret
       she was learning                    as the opposite.         passages
       to write as she                                              as "normal"
       was working on
       this book?  That                    VILLAINY
       would explain
       the interminable
       meandering at it's
       outset.

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